I love the concept. Kinda reminds me of Avatar. I suggest you need to improve with your spellings and tenses, other than that, THIS BOOK IS FREAKING AWESOME, and deserves to go into my library
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Arigatou gozaimasuuuuuuu(thank you for reviewing and ii lease help me promote my novel to others (人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)) huhuhu thank once again