Review Detail of Zane_Earth in THE ORDER OF THE ELEMENTS

Hellloooo,Halloooo I am the author of this story and I just realized I didn't even make some reviews about my novel. I did not give my novel perfect since I just started but I am sure you guys would be happy to read my novel. I welcome any comments about my mistakes or i you guys had any ideas about romance or fight scene please comment (after all I am a newbie(ᗒᗩᗕ)(ᗒᗩᗕ)). Once again, Thanks for reading my novel. I GOT SPOILER FOR THIS NOVEL..... scroll down to know the spoiler (i suggest don't because it would break your heart) SPOILER(AT THE END OF THE NOVEL) All the tribes and peoples who had the elemental power will die and turn into the dust of glittering diamonds. The main character with his wife and his friend(the guardians) will die. War will end for more than a thousand of year's and the Guardian became legends. But soon a kid will try to save the guardians by time travelling. ( so that it heheheeh don't worry you guys will meet your fav character after this book fin)