Review Detail of Jack_Lives in THAT DAY I BECAME A STAR

the need for editing shows but not to an extent that makes it painful. I don't understand why an actual storyline only shows in stories/novels that are not tragedy and anger/stress inducing. so the so called "good" stories honestly do not make the reader relax or experience much happiness during the read. this story has some of the worst lack of parental recognition off looks alone. feel free to correct me. the curse makes him easier to hate. then the only official changes are color changes in hair and eyes. somehow his parents never seem to notice the clone like looks with different hair and eyes because his attitude and stupid plot. as is a norm. adults are really a backdrop and a prop for stories while kids, teens and late teens are the ones that contribute the most. honestly. overall, I'm just mad. yo mbeutcha! i remember the confidence you put in the reply to my comment where i mentioned the need to know when i would find a satisfactory resolution to the tortured life of the mc, i wasn't here for continued tragedy. but lookey lookey! there's no record of such a comment so I must be a troll right?! you said it would all be worth it. the bitter-"sweet" ending and the parental relations "resolution" was worth it? maybe to you. and all the tragedy loving "it's such a good story" community. you're a disgusting narcissist. yup I'm biased and mad at you and hope i ruined your day with my tantrum. satisfactory?? not by a long shot. your note in the epilogue showed sincerity instead of confidence. my response would've been different had you used sincerity or even no response at all.