Review Detail of Raphis in Rise of Civilization I

In my opinion, even though this story has spiritual elements, it still falls into the category of being easy to understand. The storyline is actually quite exciting and a bit fast-paced, but you often separate or combine sentences and text that shouldn't be separated or combined. Also, the pacing of the story is a bit too quick; try to find a balance between not too fast and not too slow. Overall, it's quite good, and don't forget to provide a synopsis.