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2021-01-16 06:27

It could have been really Really GOOD! But you just have to pull the, "Imma tell my goddess everything about me" Card. *Sigh* It's also sad that you're an experienced Fanfiction author, you already made lots of other Fic but you're still this bad? (Forgive me for being blunt) have you not been listening to you're readers advise? Or even researching about the world you're OC is going to be transported to? (Forgive me if I offended you) It's honestly sad to see this Good potential of a Fic go to this road. Alas, I'm just a no body and a Fic is a fic, bad or good it doesn't matter, as long as the author is enjoying himself while writing it. That is all and good luck.

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