Review Detail of ssdxd in ZeroFive

look I'm going to be honest the summary drew me in it really did but when I started reading it I was confused. you had 2 or 3 chapters of explaining the system that could have been one, you had him be dead from the polls and used 2 or three chapters again that could have been one, then you didn't introduce the nieces the story on what it's about the uncle and the nieces until chapter 11 I believe I couldn't read anymore after that. half of the story is nothing but filler and I understand you have set a place for the characters but not 7 or so chapters that's just filler. I dont know if he even meet the nieces or not because I just couldn't read it after chapter 11 or whatever chapter the nieces were introduced by cameo. dont gey me started on that system that took his soul like yeah I searched for you and took half your soul are you okay with that