the story is good but, sigh. its so tiring to read for example, when its explaining how the system function works it takes 2-3 chapters or sometimes it just go around and around before he fet to the point, what usually need 1 sentence to explain become 2-3 sentence or almost a chapter. i like the story but unfortunately not the writing and the system too.
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