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LostSoldier1
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This novel has potential, but it is redundant. The story is filled with merciless infodumps that constantly come back with a vengeance, the fact that they are often awkwardly written is a bonus. In the 19 chapters I read, the MC only cleaned himself in the bathroom repeatedly and just barely entered his first dungeon. I also have a feeling that the characters in this story are a bunch of walking scripts (MC's interactions with Lily and his Ice Queen manager felt especially awkward). In contrast, the Roulette System is really interesting, as it isn't constrained by popular items from different works and it truly feels like anything could come out of it (though the pills and the all-purpose smart knife did feel a little too convenient). In short, characters and writing need an upgrade. I really want to start properly reading this work instead of skimming through it, as it genuinely has its own uniqueness. Thanks for your hard work, Author!

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is it a harem