Review Detail of JorieDS in Square2: The Journey of a Water Elemental Mage

Author here, reviewing her own work! This is my second original story here and, unsurprisingly, I spent more time in doing the world building and thinking in all the little things. There was so much work to be done so for now I've focused on the main characters and the problems they will face, but now that I've finally posted this in the transmigration contest, I will finally have time to work more on the world building. Wish me luck!