Review Detail of amaturewriter in Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan

i have read the mtl version man and i was not impressed story looked far too forced after some.40 chapters

what happens? is it the relationships? or the reasons that make MC stay in konoha or why he doesnt become OP despite all his hax? [ cause the what happens usually in mtl ff]..or is it something else?

2nd reason whenever he get's a powerup something comes up. he has a army of mangekyu clones and still... he has a lot of power and next second he is nerfed. he didn't do anything about his seal. he doesn't leave konaha and he barely survive orchimaru etc.

that is stupid. thx for heads up

Chinese fanfictions are stupid I hate em. I regret reading their mtl.

I swear...like they entertaining no doubt but the writers fk up cannon so much and still allow it to happen. the fk? like the marine story with garps nephew. MC killed doffy, bigmom, crocodile, and yet cannon still happened. the hell? retarded

I agree the beggining is so fun. But if you read the 500-1000chapters Chinese fanfictions the plot twist IS SO FUCKING ANNOYING AND ENRAGING. ****! I wasted my time and brain cells reading mtl.

I HATE MTL!!! I mean Chinese novels are like a diamond at the core but their writing style and totally identical portrayl of their characters and of course the cliché forced and pathetic romance is like selling a diamond after covering it in a million layers mud.😤😤

Thanks for the review man i nearly wasted my time there

oh hi fancy seeing you here. I like your magneto novel

thanks

Could you please tell me what mtl is? I have no fuc*ing idea

Most likely machine translation but could be wrong

machine translation. Kinda like if you were to put an entire chapter through google translate, yet slightly more readable. If you can stand the Engrish some of them are fine, but every once in a while you'll find one that has such god awful grammar you get a headache just from reading it.

Ok thanks

Fui el único que se dio cuenta que yui sería mucho mejor uchiha que hyuga, esa frase, "el me importa más que el mundo mismo" solo esa frase me dice que si ella hubiese tenido sharingan se hubiese petado más que madara, y seria la protagonista rota en lugar del protagonista actual.

I've read this fanfic through the end on mtl and its pretty good in the middle part of the story where he got his female fire clone and also playing around with the akatsuki and the end of the book is actually not that bad its quite satisfying because from all the work and research he done to make it and this weeding which there something happened but not gona spoil.

Lol don't believe that guy it's pretty good right up to the end

True. I often read mtl but I can't stand reading Pokemon Court which I was interested in