I'm sorry to say this but i could read only till the chapter 3. Normally i would give it change, because i genuinely like harem genre and rarely drop a novel involves a harem route. But your novel feels like a causal conversation between 2 people due to your writing and narrative. Sometimes i can't understand what's happening due to things developing randomly and fast without having a proper explanation and building. Like he casually says he's from another word and she shouldn't say anything about it. But she just straight accepts it. No questions? No thoughts or precautions before revealing you're from another world? It seems everything is OK.
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