Review Detail of David_Drake in Evolution: A Warlock's Rise To Power
Review detail
Its a meh fanfic. Nothing really different from other MMO fics out there. Only thing I find disappointing is the MC suddenly trusts Silent Night right after he was betrayed. Then she takes up as much screen time as our MC where I gave up continuing the fic. Freaking romantic interests killed the story for me.
Evolution: A Warlock's Rise To Power
Dao_Of_Fiction
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He is a low rank warlock and he talks about how all warlocks are solo people cause of them needing to sacrifice players. So the general stigma is that all warlocks are evil and everyone would generally kill them. However, our MC ignores his previous monologue talking about this and joins a random group of adventurers. Where they go into the dungeon and they use him as a meat shield by tossing him at the boss and watch him fall into the darkness below. Later on, he does some BS insanity thing about getting revenge and the romantic interest appears right afterwards. Where our MC suddenly forgets about the betrayal and continues on with his life with his new 'friend'.
DoomofTennos:how was he betrayed? plz explain so I can know if I should read or not... Plz relpy soon
If that happen I would rate this fic wayy lower. However, my only issue is the fact he has a romantic interest this soon into the story. Where it appears to me as a very abrupt and unnatural progression. Based on prior events.
DoomofTennos:.... I thought the romantic interest the one who betrayed him XD