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Venom_God
Venom_GodLv124yr
2020-11-09 05:45

Rebirth in KurokoNoBasket....that fanfic was garbage.....worst sport fanfic ever.....so ur going to make ur mc like that....................

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Patrick_star
Patrick_starLv11

what happened?

TruckkunJr
TruckkunJrAuthor

The similarity of Rebirth and my Fan-fic are the guys abilities as well as Starting at Middle school, so the plot and story are different just some aspects of ideas from it.

Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

Lol that mc had 3 wish but still gets his ass shit on by the young generation.....the author even nerfed his skill.....i dont wanna read If mc loses like that(Shounen mc)

TruckkunJr:The similarity of Rebirth and my Fan-fic are the guys abilities as well as Starting at Middle school, so the plot and story are different just some aspects of ideas from it.
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TruckkunJr
TruckkunJrAuthor

I agree with you about the Mc losing against Teiko all the time but i understand why he did that. Tbh i hate simp mc like issei or mc that don't do shit when beyond 3rd base arrives. Shin will be a man and winner who shows the generation of miracles there place

Venom_God:Lol that mc had 3 wish but still gets his ass shit on by the young generation.....the author even nerfed his skill.....i dont wanna read If mc loses like that(Shounen mc)
Ruderalis
RuderalisLv4

Don’t worry about the other comment. It’s a childish reaction from people who have grown accustomed to wish fulfilment stories without any kind of purpose or character development. Rebirth in KNB is good, not perfect but the choices the author made were understandable

Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

lol it was not...but I'm not going to waste my time explaining cuz all the 1-star review did.......did u take the time to read the reviews and think.....cuz author made a lot of bs and is fucking unrealistic but the author tries to say is not....and I guess all people that complain and say is shit wants the wish fulfilment type...lol fanfic, in general, is wish-fulfilment....

Ruderalis:Don’t worry about the other comment. It’s a childish reaction from people who have grown accustomed to wish fulfilment stories without any kind of purpose or character development. Rebirth in KNB is good, not perfect but the choices the author made were understandable
Ruderalis
RuderalisLv4

Yes that is exactly what I’m saying

Venom_God:lol it was not...but I'm not going to waste my time explaining cuz all the 1-star review did.......did u take the time to read the reviews and think.....cuz author made a lot of bs and is fucking unrealistic but the author tries to say is not....and I guess all people that complain and say is shit wants the wish fulfilment type...lol fanfic, in general, is wish-fulfilment....
Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

ur just one of his fanboys....he sits in the back drinking while his little fanboys try to defend the shitty fanfic...lol I even said the fanboys try to defend the author but they make them self stupid which the author liked....hahaha

Ruderalis:Don’t worry about the other comment. It’s a childish reaction from people who have grown accustomed to wish fulfilment stories without any kind of purpose or character development. Rebirth in KNB is good, not perfect but the choices the author made were understandable
Ruderalis
RuderalisLv4

No, I just happen to appreciate good writing. I never said it was perfect but the choices made are backed by the story and his Mc doesn’t pull a win out of his ass. When a character is well written you can be frustrated or even angry with him. Dismissing my opinion by saying I’m a fanboy or even referring to other reviews is why I said the reactions are childish. You didn’t like what you read so you say that it is garbage. I can understand your frustration and I might have been a bit to rude when voicing my opinion but you should learn to recognize quality and separate it from you personal likes or dislikes. I do hope that someday you learn from this and become able to appreciate novels for what they are. I won’t say more than that since I don’t have the time nor the patience to dwelve on this topic. Enjoy your evening and please think about what I just wrote.

Venom_God:ur just one of his fanboys....he sits in the back drinking while his little fanboys try to defend the shitty fanfic...lol I even said the fanboys try to defend the author but they make them self stupid which the author liked....hahaha
Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

yea I don't like it and in my opinion, is trash........but there is no point in arguing...if u like it good for u..... everyone has different taste and my bad for calling u fanboy lol...I thought u would be like those in the reviews

Ruderalis:No, I just happen to appreciate good writing. I never said it was perfect but the choices made are backed by the story and his Mc doesn’t pull a win out of his ass. When a character is well written you can be frustrated or even angry with him. Dismissing my opinion by saying I’m a fanboy or even referring to other reviews is why I said the reactions are childish. You didn’t like what you read so you say that it is garbage. I can understand your frustration and I might have been a bit to rude when voicing my opinion but you should learn to recognize quality and separate it from you personal likes or dislikes. I do hope that someday you learn from this and become able to appreciate novels for what they are. I won’t say more than that since I don’t have the time nor the patience to dwelve on this topic. Enjoy your evening and please think about what I just wrote.
Zurc_Aled_Ailehd
Zurc_Aled_AilehdLv2

UMM..... JUST DONT BE RUDE ......AND WE KNOW.... ITS FOR FULLFILMENT OF THE READER THAT THE FUNFIC WORKS..... NOT ONLY YOU ITS US WITH THE AUTHOR..... I MEAN IS THAT IF YOU FEEL FUCKING TIRED OF IT DONT READ IT..... AND JUST SHIT THERE IN THE SIDE DONT MAKE IT OBVIOUS THAT YOURE A DISCLAIMER😔😔😔😔

Venom_God:lol it was not...but I'm not going to waste my time explaining cuz all the 1-star review did.......did u take the time to read the reviews and think.....cuz author made a lot of bs and is fucking unrealistic but the author tries to say is not....and I guess all people that complain and say is shit wants the wish fulfilment type...lol fanfic, in general, is wish-fulfilment....
Yahaka
YahakaLv6

Well i know that author want let people know that basket is still team based and and you can't solo other team when their overall skill not much different and hey MC still at middle school so unless he get unlimited stamina he can't do all posisition by himself what will happen to him will be same when he doing it in second year, but in his 3rd year he will win not only he learned lesson from his 1st and 2nd year he also upgrade his skill. so i waited for the glory.

Venom_God:Lol that mc had 3 wish but still gets his ass shit on by the young generation.....the author even nerfed his skill.....i dont wanna read If mc loses like that(Shounen mc)
Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

Lol if u read some reviews u wont say that....all the author did is bs but im not gonna explain cuz is already in the reviews...but i get it if u like it...everyone has different taste but all im saying it was shit for me just like how other readers felt by goving 1 star and explaining everything...

Yahaka:Well i know that author want let people know that basket is still team based and and you can't solo other team when their overall skill not much different and hey MC still at middle school so unless he get unlimited stamina he can't do all posisition by himself what will happen to him will be same when he doing it in second year, but in his 3rd year he will win not only he learned lesson from his 1st and 2nd year he also upgrade his skill. so i waited for the glory.
HotWetDream
HotWetDreamLv13

shut up blind Kid 😂 that rebirth is not trash. its good. stop shitting with ur mouth, use ur azz instead and shit elsewhere not here. dont read if u dont like it. cuz WE LIKE IT. I appreciate all authors, at least they put enough courage to write and improve better. way to go author

Kido_TO
Kido_TOLv4

The worst comment I ever saw. It's just a folk abusing amidst a crowd of praisers.

Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

Okay

Kido_TO:The worst comment I ever saw. It's just a folk abusing amidst a crowd of praisers.
Kido_TO
Kido_TOLv4

I didn't knew the antonym of praise so I wrote abuse. I'm glad to know you're okay with that -:)

Venom_God:Okay
Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

LOL

Kido_TO:I didn't knew the antonym of praise so I wrote abuse. I'm glad to know you're okay with that -:)
Great_Young_Master
Great_Young_MasterLv4

In my opinion, although there are things that some readers don't like for example he keeps losing to Teiko while having good wishes and also having good teammates in the 1st year and still lost to Teiko however I won't give it a one star because of that. I would always think about the plot of the novels that I've read, grammar, etc. The grammar on that novel is pretty good. The author tried to do something unique though readers are mad of it (even me who is defending the novel is kinda mad on how the way they lost.). It's not like the author just straight up copy the anime and just put the MC almost straight to canon to show how he good he is. The MC is not bland where he doesn't seems like a real person and the author actually build his character. The romance isn't actually force and is pretty good. These are the reasons why I think the novel doesn't deserve a one star.

Venom_God:Lol if u read some reviews u wont say that....all the author did is bs but im not gonna explain cuz is already in the reviews...but i get it if u like it...everyone has different taste but all im saying it was shit for me just like how other readers felt by goving 1 star and explaining everything...
AbsoluteVoid
AbsoluteVoidLv2

The author is not headed towards the direction you are thinking of. I'm so confused about why you are still here after losing the argument just to say pointless things.

Venom_God:Lol if u read some reviews u wont say that....all the author did is bs but im not gonna explain cuz is already in the reviews...but i get it if u like it...everyone has different taste but all im saying it was shit for me just like how other readers felt by goving 1 star and explaining everything...
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