Review Detail of Salmon_El_Solomon in My new item can raise infatuation, but!

This is without one to offend someone or insult, is my most sincere criticism of the novel from my point of view. Well, the story has a good beginning, and very captivating but the development afterwards is very bad, in the end it is not understood if it wants to be realism or fantasy, the timelines or they make sense and the past of the mc is very confusing, first they say That he lived in the city after he lived in the country, the MC's mentality does not make sense, it is so changing and discordant with his past that it makes him angry and then his fat, first they say it was because of his hormones and then because of eating.