Review Detail of RAMichaels in OUR FLAME: ALWAYS AND FOREVER

Author, I was hooked after the first chapter. I love the MC and using the memory loss as a plot element is a great tool that propelled the story. However, some of your chapters were not so easily to decipher who was saying what to whom or when the MC was thinking as quotation marks were missing for a three person conversation. It became a little confusing. Overall, great storyline! Keep updating and keep writing! Cheers, Ra!