I deleted my previous review and skipped ahead to around chapter 20, I can’t say that I’ve liked it more but it’s certainly more entertaining than the first section. At around chapter 20, the kingdom is more developed and the plot doesnt center around mc showing off his little “inventions,” but rather a more action oriented plot which made up for the slight jumps in logic. If anyone wants to read, I suggest that you start by chapter 20 + because you dont really lose any part of the plot or information. I can see that the author is working very hard to take in everyone’s opinions to satisfy his reader base so I truly believe that the novel will improve in later chapters or his/her second book. Happy reading!
DemonsDescent
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LIKEOriginal novel, the first 20 chaps will be similar to I'm the king of technology, and then it'll be totally different!
Ancient_Egyptian:is this a fanfiction or original novel?
he is rewriting the novel on the go so you may get the case of the mc talking with his family and stuff into going about TV right away, since the rewrite are way different and better, after all, so not sure the 'skip 20 chapter' can apply for this case now that he rewrite it
DarkKnight32:bro those chapters have been deeted i was so confused wtf is happening mc has gone from covinicing people to farm to modern day city thats really bad not sure if author read you review then deleted more then 20 chapters or what its just idiotic to do something like that