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Wataray1
Wataray1Lv13yr
2020-11-26 22:20

So I saw one of your comments but I could not reply to it so I will do it here "lol. You know, Naruto and Hinata should never have been a couple. Naruto and Hinata are cute and all. But what did that give? In a useless hokage / dad, with a wife who can't handle him. Tell me, if it was Sakura or even Karin who had married him, do you think Naruto would be as hateful as he is today? Minato would be like him if it weren't for Kushina." You speak as if it's matter of fact or anything by saying 'should' who are you? the author ? his friend? ' (I'm talking about the Original Work and not your fanfic parody obviously) you never had never have and never will have any say in it man so don't push your view onto others as if it's true and to answer that sentence they are a couple because that's how it is, many say it was not properly developed or anything but I just say you just didn't pay any attention sure he had a crush on sakura at first but in shippuden it's more of friendship than an actual crush he grew out of it and Hinata's crush developed into love through the entire series romance is not the main part and was only approached at the end of the series for every couple Where did you see that she can't handle him? she is shown to be able do so multiple times after their marriage on the contrary she supports him in his job As for if he married one of the two you told about ? you don't know and I say he would have been the same do you know? because that's how he is it won't change his core and he would have been the same! as for minato and kushina ? where did you see her reign him? she was more like hinata than anything when married and we did not see much of minato Hokage So what I mean to say is that NaruHina is properly written and have reasons to be and is also one the best pairing in my and many others opinion whilst Sakura never deserved him and never will and that's not an opinion but a truth if you saw the series You should not talk about your opinions as if they were true while they were not and are not true

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josemoh
josemohLv1

Thanks for avoiding me to read a story with such an author mindset

OhhhhNooo
OhhhhNoooLv10

The story is good and seems to be developing per chapter. Their is a weak link with the age of the characters but, the author has spotted it. Im sure he is bound to change a thing or two and this shows that he is competent and changes with time. The argument here is correct but, lets not forget that it is what the author thinks and not what he has done. Romance wise it seems to be open and for a while too. Over all it is a good find and with a minimum change it will be perfect. Not giving it a chance your self dew to one comment is an L. Author i home u find motivation to make changes to the story i wouldn’t mind it as long as you make an extra chapter explaining it untill you have made the changes. No diaper scene or make it in like chapter 1 or 2 and change age 3 to age 5-6 and age 6 to age 8. I recommend.

josemoh:Thanks for avoiding me to read a story with such an author mindset
OhhhhNooo
OhhhhNoooLv10

Also if anyone reads my comment note that i wrote a whole essay just to have it deleted by the site loading or what ever😡. Take it easy and i recamend ✌️😂😂.

OhhhhNooo:The story is good and seems to be developing per chapter. Their is a weak link with the age of the characters but, the author has spotted it. Im sure he is bound to change a thing or two and this shows that he is competent and changes with time. The argument here is correct but, lets not forget that it is what the author thinks and not what he has done. Romance wise it seems to be open and for a while too. Over all it is a good find and with a minimum change it will be perfect. Not giving it a chance your self dew to one comment is an L. Author i home u find motivation to make changes to the story i wouldn’t mind it as long as you make an extra chapter explaining it untill you have made the changes. No diaper scene or make it in like chapter 1 or 2 and change age 3 to age 5-6 and age 6 to age 8. I recommend.
Tennouji_Kotarou
Tennouji_KotarouAuthor

The comment may have seemed strange, since it was 4 ~ 5 am here in my country. Well, first I apologize if I offended you or anything. What I said was my opinion. Everyone knew that Naruto and Hinata would end up together in the end. I liked it from the beginning of the couple. But in my opinion the development of the romance between them was not pleasant. I read your comment and you are right. But even so I didn't like the development of Naruto's ***** life and I'm just blaming something, in fact it was the author who did it. He is the real culprit for making the Naruto we see in Boruto. A Naruto that "I" don't like. Hinata as mother and wife is incredible, but maybe if Naruto married another girl, things like what happened on Himawari's birthday wouldn't have happened. Again, I apologize if I offended, but I always look for something logical in the story to see what made this development happen. About your evaluation, you are taking something out of my thoughts, from my opinion to evaluate the work. I would like you to read and evaluate my work itself, but that's okay ...

Hewwo_Jesus
Hewwo_JesusLv3

Opinions and the story are two different things, this is like hating sprite because it's a carbonated beverage like coke, without trying sprite. You're review is honestly stupid, and irrelevant, don't try to screw up the ratings.

Wataray1
Wataray1Lv1

'this is like hating sprite because it's a carbonated beverage like coke' well if he doesn't like carbonated beverage it means he don't like coke and sprite Now maybe it's irrelevant for you but so what? it's my review? do you go through the review and comment this in every 5 star review with nothing inside? those are irrelevant, I gave my opinion on my review and that's all that matter whether it's irrelevant or not is to each person to decide and there already is one that found it irrelevant and I guess many seeing the numbers of like, I'm not screwing up the rating since those with no actual content in their review do, now your answer was honestly stupid, dumb irrelevant so go and make your own if you ain't happy

Hewwo_Jesus:Opinions and the story are two different things, this is like hating sprite because it's a carbonated beverage like coke, without trying sprite. You're review is honestly stupid, and irrelevant, don't try to screw up the ratings.
Wataray1
Wataray1Lv1

found it relevant*

Wataray1:'this is like hating sprite because it's a carbonated beverage like coke' well if he doesn't like carbonated beverage it means he don't like coke and sprite Now maybe it's irrelevant for you but so what? it's my review? do you go through the review and comment this in every 5 star review with nothing inside? those are irrelevant, I gave my opinion on my review and that's all that matter whether it's irrelevant or not is to each person to decide and there already is one that found it irrelevant and I guess many seeing the numbers of like, I'm not screwing up the rating since those with no actual content in their review do, now your answer was honestly stupid, dumb irrelevant so go and make your own if you ain't happy
ArthurBGenesis
ArthurBGenesisLv14

author you don't need to mind this crazy fangirl's comment since its his/her opinion and you also have your opinion

Tennouji_Kotarou:The comment may have seemed strange, since it was 4 ~ 5 am here in my country. Well, first I apologize if I offended you or anything. What I said was my opinion. Everyone knew that Naruto and Hinata would end up together in the end. I liked it from the beginning of the couple. But in my opinion the development of the romance between them was not pleasant. I read your comment and you are right. But even so I didn't like the development of Naruto's ***** life and I'm just blaming something, in fact it was the author who did it. He is the real culprit for making the Naruto we see in Boruto. A Naruto that "I" don't like. Hinata as mother and wife is incredible, but maybe if Naruto married another girl, things like what happened on Himawari's birthday wouldn't have happened. Again, I apologize if I offended, but I always look for something logical in the story to see what made this development happen. About your evaluation, you are taking something out of my thoughts, from my opinion to evaluate the work. I would like you to read and evaluate my work itself, but that's okay ...
Peacemaker2_at_
Peacemaker2_at_Lv13

What is Boruto? Is that some kind of crappy Naruto FF or what? I mean I'm pretty sure it doesn't exist. Is it a spin-off?

Tennouji_Kotarou:The comment may have seemed strange, since it was 4 ~ 5 am here in my country. Well, first I apologize if I offended you or anything. What I said was my opinion. Everyone knew that Naruto and Hinata would end up together in the end. I liked it from the beginning of the couple. But in my opinion the development of the romance between them was not pleasant. I read your comment and you are right. But even so I didn't like the development of Naruto's ***** life and I'm just blaming something, in fact it was the author who did it. He is the real culprit for making the Naruto we see in Boruto. A Naruto that "I" don't like. Hinata as mother and wife is incredible, but maybe if Naruto married another girl, things like what happened on Himawari's birthday wouldn't have happened. Again, I apologize if I offended, but I always look for something logical in the story to see what made this development happen. About your evaluation, you are taking something out of my thoughts, from my opinion to evaluate the work. I would like you to read and evaluate my work itself, but that's okay ...
EverRed
EverRedLv1

Yes....Yes It Is

Peacemaker2_at_:What is Boruto? Is that some kind of crappy Naruto FF or what? I mean I'm pretty sure it doesn't exist. Is it a spin-off?
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