I will give you one more chance even though I said I would not because this seems to have potential please do not drop this like your other books
HaremGodZ
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LIKEI hope you did not drop this I have a friend who is a writer and it is good to be consistent with writing or people drop the book and the author usually ends up dropping it at least frequently update your books (that is why I am careful to read your books because I don't like your practices and how you don't do this) P.S. don't delete this comment I have given you constructive criticism
HaremGodZ:Thanks
DaoistCrazy1122:I hope you did not drop this I have a friend who is a writer and it is good to be consistent with writing or people drop the book and the author usually ends up dropping it at least frequently update your books (that is why I am careful to read your books because I don't like your practices and how you don't do this) P.S. don't delete this comment I have given you constructive criticism