Review Detail of CrystalTsuki in [BL] Transmigrated Into The Book(Omegaverse)
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This story is enjoyable. There were a lot of crying moments for me. The slight problem I have is the world development. The first and second arcs were fine because it was set as a normal modern Onegaverse, but then, world 3 and 4 lacks a lot of details and world development. In world 3, I had a few moments where I do not know what is happening and the descriptions did not give me a clear idea of world. For example, I understand that the world is Medieval-like, but that’s clearly it. There is not a lot if background knowledge on it. It doesn’t even explain why the ML’s father was a big jerk.
[BL] Transmigrated Into The Book(Omegaverse)
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Hello my dear reader! Thank you for the review..this author over here will improve more for the future! Don't worry! We still have many worlds coming in the future! In world 3, Ru Xian's father was indeed cruel(my readers hated him). I didn't gave him enough spotlight because I have a reason(I'm planning to write a sequel book wehehe) If you are missing our omegaverse stuffs that much,don't worry! I will write more in the future!! Thank you so much!!