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PBOM2004
PBOM2004Author3yrPBOM2004

This is a Zombie apocalypse novel, And there would be many mistakes and wrong grammars. And I'm shameless for reviewing myself with a Five-star rating.

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Leveling System in Apocalypse World

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louisjacq
louisjacqLv15louisjacq

Me reading the 2nd chapter:"What!?How...WHY!!!!!"

Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4Nikhil_Chand

will this be harem?

KingNitro
KingNitroLv3KingNitro

Please don't make this a harem author, I'm begging you. Have it more focused on action.Harem always ruins good stories.

akirakunz
akirakunzLv4akirakunz

True harem s*ck and destroyed too many stories

Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15Daoist_Culture

Harem for the win!

Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15Daoist_Culture

Wtf Nitro xd harems are too good .. .Void monarch needs one too.

KingNitro:Please don't make this a harem author, I'm begging you. Have it more focused on action.Harem always ruins good stories.
KingNitro
KingNitroLv3KingNitro

lolll

Daoist_Culture:Wtf Nitro xd harems are too good .. .Void monarch needs one too.
PBOM2004
PBOM2004AuthorPBOM2004

Well I did say there would be plot holes and grammar mistakes in this story.

louisjacq:Me reading the 2nd chapter:"What!?How...WHY!!!!!"
NamelessQ
NamelessQLv14NamelessQ

Grammar ruined the whole story for me. You probably should learn to write in English better or find someone who could do it for you. Thanks tho interesting story idea.