Review Detail of AxlesOfFate in Schutzengel

First I want to talk about the title "Battle Maids." Already loving the idea of it. It reminds me of the anime overlord where they have the Pleiades a combat maid squad of the great Tome of Nazrick. I don't know I just love overlord so I again love the idea of Battle Maids. From reading, I can tell this Author moves quickly. The reader is dropped right into the conflict of the story from chapter one. Not many stories can do that but the tension is expertly built from the very first paragraph, and it only grows from there. Dialogue is masterfully utilized to increase tension and flesh out characters letting us as readers immerse ourselves in the writer's story. In summary, not many people are able to use the first-person perspective quite as well as it is used here. We can only see things from one angle and it is refreshing to see it done well. Continue the good work author!