Review Detail of Anotoki in Werewolf fate: The love is eternal, so the war is
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Well honestly, the first few chapters are not grabbing the attention of the readers. Your way of words are pretty decent but it doesn't mean that it was a bad thing, you still have room for improving.
Werewolf fate: The love is eternal, so the war is
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Spacewarrior17:Ohh.. I will consider your advice, I actually deleted many parts so it is looking very messy now😣 You know it's difficult to right in the language which is not your native and thus choice of word to describe a Scene is lacking. I will improve them over time 🙂
AnotokiLv11Anotoki
The easiest way is to read another story on the platform, perhaps you could copy the way how they were written or perhaps makes it as a reference. Either way, this was my advice and it is up to you to ignore it nor not.
Spacewarrior17:Ohh.. I will consider your advice, I actually deleted many parts so it is looking very messy now😣 You know it's difficult to right in the language which is not your native and thus choice of word to describe a Scene is lacking. I will improve them over time 🙂