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2021-01-02 14:48

This book is genuinely interesting and catching! I love how uniquely specific some elements were. for example, MC is just a normal boy who loves C-dramas. Transmigration element is obviously a huge plus point! You've chosen a Dynasty era with many possibilities and unanswered questions in the first chapter itself which will leave the readers hooked and curious! Writing style is good and easily enjoyable. Keep up the good work fellow Author!

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I hope that I can fulfill the crave of my readers- I think you can see some limitations in my writing style and knowledge of words, which is actually caused by me, only having a knowledge to the extent of building a world by reading the historical texts available about the Jurchen Jins , But there's a problem for me to know as much as a real Chinese person who has born in China. Me, being an Indian can't reach that level of knowledge of the period. another thing is- you will find a typical downgrading in my first 8 chapters, which was caused by me being a newcomer- not knowing much about writing a novel. Currently, I am working in it to complete the edits as soon as possible to make sure my readers don't get annoyed between the mistakes. Thanks for your suggestions and the good words, fellow author- Good luck for you too!😊[img=recommend]

AnaRose
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I understand where you're coming from. But I feel you have so much potential and a passionate story teller! I hope everything works out for u!

Ritankar_Sarkar_:I hope that I can fulfill the crave of my readers- I think you can see some limitations in my writing style and knowledge of words, which is actually caused by me, only having a knowledge to the extent of building a world by reading the historical texts available about the Jurchen Jins , But there's a problem for me to know as much as a real Chinese person who has born in China. Me, being an Indian can't reach that level of knowledge of the period. another thing is- you will find a typical downgrading in my first 8 chapters, which was caused by me being a newcomer- not knowing much about writing a novel. Currently, I am working in it to complete the edits as soon as possible to make sure my readers don't get annoyed between the mistakes. Thanks for your suggestions and the good words, fellow author- Good luck for you too!😊[img=recommend]
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Just reading it because the MC is Indian

AnaRose
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haha

bloodaxe:Just reading it because the MC is Indian
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