Your translation is much better. its a good story but its hard to read without a good translation read the other and see if yours is better if so keep doing your translation.
kluver
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LIKEHey bro, can you give this a try on translating, its not to bad with the machine translation, but would be nice to see it a little more readable. https://***.mtlnovel.com/start-ten-consecutive-draws-and-then-invincible/
kluver:Thank you so much!
Peryite:He doesn’t get romance in the naruto world and hasn’t so far in the second world