Review Detail of Skeletal_Gnoll in The Legacy System

tried really hard to make it past the first chapter. really, I did. the grammar made my eyes bleed and bled, due to inability to stick to present or past tense, and the blonde man with the katana and many wives made me cringe so hard that my father felt it. along with mc's inability to draw even the simplest only conclusions and the never ending train if tropes running their own train on my eyes, I couldn't make it. OP, please download grammar.ly or MS word with spell check, please. your product would be infinitely better even without proof reading.