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Review Detail of Lordmoonlight in The Legacy System

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Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv53yrLordmoonlight

won't beat around the bush mc doesn't seem mature for a guy who build a empire and the fact that hes like any perverted kid suchs I mean the first thing he thought about was girls not to get stronger but girls I can't take this type of harem bruh you need strength before you think about those shit and he should know that I think you need to reread your story now like how it's at 100+ chapters and see even though you have your view point it's just like every bad harem we see now a days shameless and perverted mc won't give this a bad review but wont give it 5 stars for a revenge story it started way too wrong your back in the past and you think with your dick first without the system constant mock that the mc is weak for a 10000 year old dude it's kinda sa

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crazy_immortal
crazy_immortalAuthorcrazy_immortal

noted...

CriticalReader
CriticalReaderLv2CriticalReader

I doubt it

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Jinrex5
Jinrex5Lv4Jinrex5

I doubt it too very disapointing for a revenge novel

Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv5Lordmoonlight

wont lie latest chapters are better seen growth in your writing just some mistakes now and again

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UncleDodger
UncleDodgerLv11UncleDodger

disappointed...

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