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Review Detail of JustMortal in The Legacy System

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He was betrayed and die because of his stupidity then he got back to the time where he is 18yrs.old after the legacy stone activated. Do you know what he did after going back past? He Scream like an Idiot. He's thinking still 18yra.old despite being a millennium years old. And after he scream he suddenly saw his teacher and think how to get her and then his lover and revenge. (OMG) the author said: "He still a human and not a machine" Which Old Idiot do that? I even ask my little brother about a situation like that and what would he do next and he has better answer and mindset than the mc in this novel. I don't know the rest because I only read after he woke up and Scream like an idiot and The end :) ∆Read this book you may find it interesting but I'm no to harem so I'm not belong here.. I know some may think how did I bother writing review if im not into harem.. well... im just bored. I just reviewed what I read so far :) +Writing Quality : 2/5 Hard to read the system without bracket [] +Story Development: 3/5 I don't know 😂 +Character Design: 3/5 +Updating Stability: 4/5 +World Background: 3/5 Same as earth as I seen so far -I don't know if my english is good or bad so please pardon me :) Good Luck author and keep going

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try reading Hitman Hitman Garden, you won't be disappointed.