Review Detail of eyaggelia146 in The Twisted Memories

The story has an interesting start and suspense from the first chapter. Well done. I have a few idea that i think would help. 1) Its quite obvious the mc has ptsd and it seems strange that no one realises that and they dismiss it as stress etc. Especially therapists because the syptoms are quite obvious. 2)It would be nice to get a glimpse of what he went through,because at first we consider him a bit crazy,which helps the participation of the reader in the book but it makes the mc less approachable.