I can understand that if you were getting low ratings you would rewrite but you rewrite when doing oretty well, sadly ill be dropping this as its a waste of time to waut for it to start iver again i wish you the best if LuCk mate

Friendship, justice and good feelings - what a great qualities... Unfortunately they couldn't give you an intresting story by themselves. And that's what happens here. That's just uninteresting. Either way, for akkikan 2.0, at least you have better grammar. And more consistent characters? Hmm...

Good start. And i need more chaps,☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Great story. . . .. . .. . .. . . . . . . .. . .-..-.-..-..---.......-.-..-...-..-..-..-..-......-.-.....-.-..-.-...-.-..-.-..-.-.-.--...

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I need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm assuming its a crossover world considering the amount of characters in it. But anyway, I've seen other fanfictions where they try to force a scene in, and just please don't do that. I'm not here to discourage you, on the contrary I would like you to continue but there are some things that are very difficult to have to read. Example; MC: Ring that hides magical power from someone close to the top in DxD Redheaded Girl Who can barely classify as high class: Finds out when he did nothing that would warrant attention. Like really don't pull stuff like this. No diss to the author who wrote the novel who's scenario I'm using if you recognize.

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The updating and writing quality is good it's just the world background and story development Is what i have a problem with cause we don't know what world the mc is in but eugeo from sao is in the same world as him then right after the mc meets eugeo he tries to adopt him just cause it's eugeo and the parents agreed and the mc and his parents are archdukes so they would never adopt someone just cause their son asked them to another thing that doesn't make sense is the mc found while he went outside by himself with no guards or anybody