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2021-02-10 06:28

I really love this story. Seriously I really enjoyed reading it and I can't wait for more updates. This review isn't very detailed, just me saying that it was a very enjoyable read so far. I do think that the author should try to make their villains less cartoonish. If Bai whatever is gonna keep repeating then you should sprinkle some depth into her character. Her motivation can't just be "because I like power", there has to be something more to her character.

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Thank you so much for your kind review *-* I'm really glad you're enjoying the novel so far T////T Character motivations will be different in every word, but their personality will develop along the story, as Xi Zirui learns more about each of them, sometimes threads that start in one world will be picked up in the next. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it!

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