Review Detail of OreoGirl in It's Called Love At First Sight

I know I'm sorry i have alot tons to learn so that's why it's a challenge for me but I'll try to do my best

I can help you if you’d like

That will be so awesome

For a first basis, I would use grammarly which is free unless you would like the rich-folk version. I’d also make sure to read as it edits, at times it messes up the sentences, or changes names. I’d also try reading your story outloud afterwords. I would look at is as any other book, and ask myself if this makes sense to me. If you would like a touch it up, you could slide in fancier words in replacement for other words to make an awesomer vocabulary.

Thank you

and i know i can't be perfect but i tried my best though