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Review Detail of Chillhawai in The Wise Magician

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Chillhawai
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Man I gotta say this a good one. I'm waiting for future updates. I can say that from a readers perspective this is a novel where even a first time readers(like those that have just started reading LNs) can put themselves in the universe. There can be some improvement in the introduction of characters like some 2-3 lines in the beginning for the elder sister and the mother as they came out of nowhere. All in all this is one of the rare novels which I think can be good for both binge-reading or a chapter a day. I can sense some potential from it that's why I'm posting a review. Sorry can't give donos as I'm still a student but will try my best to support you. Keep up the good work 👍🏻👍🏻and I would wish to read it further. I giving you a 3 for the update stability but will change it if it gets regular updates and also I didn't see any fatal error in writing so good for you. I know that you are your own author but pls don't add a cliche like the MC saving a girl and then the girl getting head over heels for the MC but some subtle romance, if any P.S. I came from 'mangakakalot' so don't think that no one's reading your comment.

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Hi, thanks for comment. First of all, I'm happy to know that someone enjoy reading my light novel. So for that, thank you so much. Actually I'm still new at this and I really welcome any advice or suggestion. Second, now that I look at it again, that part for character introduction really need a little bit more details. Lastly, the cliche that you mentioned usually used for harem and honestly I'm not a fan for a subtle romance like that. So don't worry about it. Hehe. Again, thank you for letting me know your opinion.