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Review Detail of val_the_mysterious in 3 hours - A Gamble Of Time.

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Good worLd building and story concept. personally, I struggled with all the poetry in his thoughts, but thats on me. You warned early on about writing errors so I wont point that out. I feel believe that with a high output of chapters it’s hard to post anything more than a rough draft at first. The flow of the story comes across a little choppy. It’s something that can be fixed while editing. Overall it’s a good start.

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3 hours - A Gamble Of Time.

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thank you for your honest feedback! there are low grammatical errors now as I constantly go back to my work to re-edit! maybe poetry isn't your type of genreee hehe.