It has great potential if you play your cards right but you said It's a "light read". I personally want it to be a little more serious cause it will be a great novel like the plot especially the beginning it was an interesting concept you came up with and the power system It can be made in to something impressive but it's too much comedy (like mc literally trolls everyone and it's hilarious but it's too much). oh and I am not complaining I like the comedy but man can you please make this novel a little more serious as time goes by. Anyways author I am with you till the end so make sure to finish this novel and a big fan of this work. I also have a question author did he ascend yet or is it in 200ish chapter you planned to make him ascend?
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