Keep in mind that this is a 'light read', not really comedy nor is it too serious. Well... at times it is serious. If any questions, then ask here.
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LIKENo.. there is nothing serious at all in the novel. All i see is a constant shouting and bunch of exclamation mark that literally made the novel looks like it was written for fun. Comedy failed too. Mc dont have goals and he look stupid..Character names are cringe and weird. Weird af system..everything is just weird and badly written...cringe af ..Hope you will write your next novel proeprly and seriously.. using exclamation marks when writing a novel is the biggest mistake u can ever have as a writer..so stop it unless its necessary
He doesn't even have a system I don't know what bs you are spouting. I do agree he is a bit cringe but isn't everyone cringe at least a bit and the other readers don't find him cringe. Anyway whether you enjoyed or not, have a good day.
AimanFaroqq:No.. there is nothing serious at all in the novel. All i see is a constant shouting and bunch of exclamation mark that literally made the novel looks like it was written for fun. Comedy failed too. Mc dont have goals and he look stupid..Character names are cringe and weird. Weird af system..everything is just weird and badly written...cringe af ..Hope you will write your next novel proeprly and seriously.. using exclamation marks when writing a novel is the biggest mistake u can ever have as a writer..so stop it unless its necessary
Btw a light read means 'Not a proper novel', I am writing it for my own fun, something you read while eating popcorn and drinking cola. It was your mistake to have high expectations.
AimanFaroqq:No.. there is nothing serious at all in the novel. All i see is a constant shouting and bunch of exclamation mark that literally made the novel looks like it was written for fun. Comedy failed too. Mc dont have goals and he look stupid..Character names are cringe and weird. Weird af system..everything is just weird and badly written...cringe af ..Hope you will write your next novel proeprly and seriously.. using exclamation marks when writing a novel is the biggest mistake u can ever have as a writer..so stop it unless its necessary
_oinkchan:He doesn't even have a system I don't know what bs you are spouting. I do agree he is a bit cringe but isn't everyone cringe at least a bit and the other readers don't find him cringe. Anyway whether you enjoyed or not, have a good day.
hello author I'm enjoy reading this I'm just curious why you haven't block the content at a certain point i figured this was good enough to where you could have people pay for later chapters. besides that I'm liking it a lot I was just a little confused on why this wasn't rated higher on this website?
I could do that but I don't want someone else to own it but I am seriously rethinking my decisions because I do need money. As for ratings, I guess it because it is not popular enough.
kiddeath1998:hello author I'm enjoy reading this I'm just curious why you haven't block the content at a certain point i figured this was good enough to where you could have people pay for later chapters. besides that I'm liking it a lot I was just a little confused on why this wasn't rated higher on this website?