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2023-05-06 07:55

This book has a great potential of becoming one of the best novel. If only the author had spent more time in proofreading, editing and correcting the grammar before publishing the novel.

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Immortal_Goddess
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Anyone has RAWS for this one?!🤔💭 Review Until Chapter 40: ~ Rare book that has almost no error in translation and the editing was well done. No confusing he/she issues nor numbers so far. ~ UPDATING the chapters… I think it took 2 years before the 41st Chapter was released again based on the previous reviews of other readers. ~ FL CHARACTER: got confusing with regards to her intro. Not sure if she came from Modern Times or Interstellar Time. There was mention of World Government and Witch Doctors being on top list of highly dangerous group of people. And of course, she is part of it. ~ ML CHARACTER: not much was mentioned aside from that from the synopsis. He is a prodigy who wields great power over 10K but is only under 1. He is from the Imperial Family, Prince Jiu. He’s very powerful and a hooligan towards the FL🤭. He reminds me of the other Shameless ML in other stories that boils the FL in warm water like a frog. Making her get used to his shenanigans 😈 ~ PLOT: fast paced with lots of fighting from the get-go. So I’m looking forward to the development of the story. ~ COLLECT & READ THIS STORY!!!! Great find!🥰🥰🥰 OVERALL RATING: 【 95⭐️/100⭐️】: 《🤩: Awesome》 BREAKDOWN OF RATING: A. TRANSLATION QUALITY: 【 50⭐️ / 50 ⭐️ 】 1. English Grammar: 5⭐️ 2. Pronouns Usage: 5⭐️ 3. Capitalization: 5 ⭐️ 4. Spelling: 5⭐️ 5. Numbers: 5⭐️ B. STORY DEVELOPMENT / PLOT: 【 13⭐️/ 15 ⭐️】 (How well the story was told) 1. Plot Clarity: 4⭐️ 2. Consistency: 5⭐️ 3. Reaction: 4 ⭐️ C. CHARACTERS: 【15 ⭐️/ 15 ⭐️】 1. Consistency: 10⭐️ 2. Aesthetic Appraisal: 5⭐️ D. WORLD BACKGROUND: 【 4⭐️ / 5 ⭐️】 1. Historical Appraisal: 4 ⭐️ ~ confusing intro for the settings. It seems to be from the Ancient Mystical Times. E. RECOMMENDATIONS: 【 13 ⭐️ / 15 ⭐️】 (Is this a book I would (or wouldn’t) recommend to other readers?) 1. Reaction: 4⭐️ 2. Suitable For Target Readers: 5⭐️ 3. Comparison: 4⭐️

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