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Sonuvapotatoe
SonuvapotatoeLv34yr
2020-12-26 22:08

Ok I am going to inform u guys... the first arc is amazing. *I loved the fact that she was some kind of god *I loved her innocence... she wasn’t exactly stupid but she wasn’t even smart like... she was academically smart and stuff but she couldn’t think much because her brain power was at 1 * I loved the ml (altho I never figured out why he fell for her...🤨) * I loved their relationship... it was quite nice. Second arc: *i did not like this ml. He was ok but I didn’t like him * I loved the fact the the fl was stronger * I couldn’t quite understand how she suddenly started to talk to animals but didn’t use it in the first arc when she was ganged up on and was low on physical strength...(is it because her brain power was reduced to 1?) * candy * I didn’t like the fact that she was forced to stand and take care of the dude... like cmon bro. * I have zero idea how she gained his trust... and also why did he fall for her? Was it because they knew each other lots of years ago? Cause like there was no logical reason why the dude fell for her. Third arc (ok guys this is where the story headed downwards) * The ml basically raped her. * the ml was disgusting *her character became annoying to me.. i found it cute for the first and second arc but slowly became so damn annoying. * the major reason is the ml was shitty in this arc. Arc 4 * I can’t put in detail why I didn’t like it because u know I got sick and just skipped to the end... she entered beauty and the beast as the beast... it was quite smthn. I lost interest halfway in and just skipped to where she asked the ml of the story (ok so how did beauty and the beast get a ml? The ml was the beast so like who tf was the dude that was called ml? And what about belle? Did she just never meet wolfs or did she die? If the author just said she entered a story similar to beauty and the beast ok but she said she entered beauty and the beast.... so where tf did the mermaid or smthn come from? I Don’t remember what he was called.)“do u love me?” And she said never mind and asked the ‘mermaid’ who said yes and they lived.... blah blah blah. I found it rly boring.... it might be to ur taste but it wasn’t to mine. The arc u r reading for trial read tbh is the best arc in the story... enjoy it. If I was rating the first arc I would rate it 5 stars.

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MaskedWitch16
MaskedWitch16Lv13

I totally agree with you... I am in the second arc and I had the hope it would be Jiang ran but in another life, when I realized he wasn't I lost interest, now that you say there's an ml that rapes her I decided to stop reading mtl... but I really loved the first arc.

Sonuvapotatoe
SonuvapotatoeLv3

It was my favourite arc... to bad the other arcs started spiralling downwards...

MaskedWitch16:I totally agree with you... I am in the second arc and I had the hope it would be Jiang ran but in another life, when I realized he wasn't I lost interest, now that you say there's an ml that rapes her I decided to stop reading mtl... but I really loved the first arc.
MaskedWitch16
MaskedWitch16Lv13

it would have been good if the ml was the same in all planes I mean how can you forget almost instantly someone you have spent your whole life with... and the resume lied, I was hoping a system to lose weight and fall in love with a ceo haha

Sonuvapotatoe:It was my favourite arc... to bad the other arcs started spiralling downwards...
Sonuvapotatoe
SonuvapotatoeLv3

Ikr? I have zero idea what the synopsis had to do with the story.

MaskedWitch16:it would have been good if the ml was the same in all planes I mean how can you forget almost instantly someone you have spent your whole life with... and the resume lied, I was hoping a system to lose weight and fall in love with a ceo haha
Daoist47G42I
Daoist47G42ILv3

Spoiler: The ML basically all the same... It will explain on the 3rd ard I think ..

MaskedWitch16:it would have been good if the ml was the same in all planes I mean how can you forget almost instantly someone you have spent your whole life with... and the resume lied, I was hoping a system to lose weight and fall in love with a ceo haha
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