Review Detail of Kanishk_Pincha in I Have An Impenetrable Fortress

the idea is simply wonderful. however, I feel like the implementation could have been better. there are multiple things that don't make much sense. I will only like to warn others that the start of the novel is a bit fast-paced and according to the script seems like the rest of it would be too. there seems to be present a sense of urgency but I believe its execution was not good enough.