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Lieutenant_Fluffy
Lieutenant_FluffyLv13yr
2021-06-04 06:47

A lovely novel so far, with the larger-than-life personality of the MC taking center stage. Interesting to see where he'll develop and grow, as well as how the author will improve alongside him! :D Would've preferred the beginning to take its time a little more with building up the mystery of where he was dropped into, but otherwise, I do appreciate a lighting fast start that takes no time to get into the meat of its system. If you'll like the MC, you'll love this novel!

Conceited Dragon

Limpin_Technocat
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Spirit_Realm
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A fantastic story with a interesting plotline, funny and narcissistic main character to boot! Detailed descriptions on their appearances, the world build up was also well thought. Dialogue are balanced , not too much, not too little. Though, I got a little problem reading the conversation because of the two character's dialogue was not separated, but after spending time reading, the book is promising and should definitely let readers discover a new world, not the usual trope. Author-sama, Kudos! I'll be cheering on the side!

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The_Mad_Titan
The_Mad_TitanLv11

My only regret is not starting this sooner. i absolutely love Takumis personality, his sense of humor made this even more intriguing to read. I love how detailed the descriptions are, I'm definitely using my power stones for this one👏😊

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Limpin_Technocat
Limpin_TechnocatAuthor

Okay here comes the shameless author review hehe I give this five stars no doubt Why, you ask? Well, for one, this novel is totally unique, I mean COME ON!! A narcissist M.C with a harem! Totally awesome, accompanied by a PSYCHOPATH who's on the side of good. The world is unique too, unlike anything you've seen, took parts of different mythology and put my own twist on them I totally have confidence in how far this book will go AN AMAZING READ!! :D

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Jake_Aroling
Jake_ArolingLv1

Looking past the needed copyediting, this story has a very funny main character and a nice, quick plot progression. Cool world ideas and a very interesting premise. Worth a read!

3yr
mrant12
mrant12Lv2

Very very well written. The vocabulary and grammar are spot on. The plot is epic but most of all, the character growth is really well done! Excellent novel!

3yr
BLOOPINGBLOOPER
BLOOPINGBLOOPERLv1

Though I think your work needs editing, this story is quite lovely. I really like the characters, the main one is nice enough and the world is very intriguing. Nice job.

3yr
Cyclxne
CyclxneLv2

Dual MCs. You don't see this often. I gotta say though, the author did a good job of describing it and weaving it into a novel. Definitely worth the read, the 18+ scenes especially... wink, wink~

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Eshal_Shahnawaz
Eshal_ShahnawazLv2

One of the best stories I have read on Webnovel as soon as I came here. Very good writing skills and the story plot is very interesting too. I haven't met a better character that Takumi ever. The personalities of the characters are great. I would totally recommend this book to anyone. Totally worth reading!

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kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv3

I will put aside the writing quality since English is a difficult subject. (If I have to point out one, there are sentences that needs to be trimmed down and/or choped into more sentences in a paragraph.) Anyway, THE MAIN PROTAGONIST IS SUCH A FUNNY RASCAL!!!! He's such a narcissist! And a funny one! His character design is really marvellous!!

3yr
REaper
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Really a funny one, great story, great description and great comedy, I got to know how a real nariccist character is like. Great work.

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