Review Detail of Adict in Instant Mastery In Harry Potter (English)

i'll be honest. it's clearly a first work, the first chapter skips the begining of the story so there's no development and goes straight to the problem. i'm not gonna get annoying listing all bad things to me here, but when your story starts with a women thinking how handsome and awesome the mc is and how big his dick is... well i knew this is not for me