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Memonic
MemonicAuthor3yrMemonic

hello friends this is my humble novel, I am a novice writer, who wanted to try my luck and see if I can sustain myself from my writing, I hope you like it and support me, vote as much as you can and thank you for reading my novel. English is not my first language so I translated it with google.

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Instant Mastery In Harry Potter (English)

Memonic

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bhambhusuresh
bhambhusureshLv6bhambhusuresh

keep gender check otherwise very good

GLE
GLELv1GLE

The author I'm interested in one point. God has limited desires, that is, he cannot desire to travel the worlds. Does this mean that he will not travel the worlds at all or will he find some manuscript in the family's library where they tried to create a spell travel around the worlds (There must be a lot of manuscripts lct. Before Merlin's time) or he will create this spell himself. Please clarify.

Memonic
MemonicAuthorMemonic

the library is something that is already super dominated. my idea was to make life easier for my protagonist. and of course there are scrolls but there is a surprise for the future in the world of harry potter. I hope you keep reading my novel. thanks for the support. being honest I never thought someone would like the story. since I wrote it to gain experience in writing my grammar. since my first chapters I have been improving. even if I researched a lot of the harry potter forums so that the story had a solid base from spells. ages of some characters. I have even a hidden story told by J. K. Rowling herself. As I said I sincerely hope you keep reading. And you are warned that my grammar is a bit bad because of the language difference. but I'm adapting and learning from my mistakes

GLE:The author I'm interested in one point. God has limited desires, that is, he cannot desire to travel the worlds. Does this mean that he will not travel the worlds at all or will he find some manuscript in the family's library where they tried to create a spell travel around the worlds (There must be a lot of manuscripts lct. Before Merlin's time) or he will create this spell himself. Please clarify.
Shadewind
ShadewindLv6Shadewind

Is it harem...?

Angelxcx
AngelxcxLv5Angelxcx

yes

Shadewind:Is it harem...?
MasterKai808
MasterKai808Lv12MasterKai808

are u gonna continue this

kaotiCbeast
kaotiCbeastLv2kaotiCbeast

is this dropped?

MasterKai808
MasterKai808Lv12MasterKai808

are u gonna continue this or make a different one