Really bad. The grammar will be barely readable for 2 sentences, then on the next sentence you will wonder if you had a stroke. He just has to touch someone's neck to get stronger and gain their memories. The entire story is just him killing people. It starts with him choosing to fast forward until sasuke gets his genin team. Then he absorbs half the kyuubi from naruto. Then the zabuza mission starts and he's a combat master, easily killing the ambushers and stealing zabuzas sword. Absolutely 0 development this entire time, just 'he did this, then that.' The only thoughts we get are tiny bits of his plans, an example is him thinking he'll let kakashi and haku fight more so he can kill and absorb them when they're exhausted. An example at how bad the story telling is, is as soon as he wakes up as sasuke getting assigned his genin team, he starts flirting with ino. No explanation or inner thoughts as to why, author had to tell us in the comments that he plans on using her. Just fights and killing over and over. After zabuza it skips to him stealing half of gaaras power, then immediately skips to him fighting hiruzen and orochimaru at the same time. The only story in between that is him saying he will train with shadow clones to get used to his new strength, then he goes to where he can fight hiruzen. He's somehow at the kage level from absorbing a few people, yet after absorbing edo tensei hashirama he can only make a fist size piece of wood. Author said in the comments that it's because they don't want it to seem like the main character hasn't worked for his power... Like really??? You think he's worked at all in the three fights he's been in to gain the strength to beat hiruzen, orochimaru and edo tensei hashirama, tobirama and minato at the same time??? Are you even thinking when writing? It's just an awful power trip with awful grammar with zero characterization. The plot and his actions aren't even explained half the time, and the time that it IS explained is during a fight. The only explanations are either 'I want to absorb this persons power' or 'I want to kill this person, because unlike the previous person they won't be useful later.' Oh and don't forget him 'earning' his power by using a single month and shadow clones to perfectly master the use of enough strength to beat 5 kage levels at once. :
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Hahaha just an "ok" reply? The personality of the MC is much like that of the Author no wonder the MC is like that. Its best to not read this novel and just move on if you can't handle the way the MC do things its very obvious the story is going in circles its just all about killing. There are actually many other ways to go stronger without the use of " stealing powers " or " absorbing a world through infinite tsukuyomi " sigh, this is just lazy writting its obvious that the author's very repressed and this novel into an outlet. Well here's a GOOD PIECE OF ADVISE there many other novels just forget this novel and author and move on.
i feel bad for the author
