Review Detail of in Waifu Gacha System (On Hold)

I'm writing this review after reading chapter 10. This novel has a lot of potential. but I feel the plot armor is too big and too frequent in this novel. but the worst thing is the characters and their personalities. their personalities are bland and i get an immature vibe from them, it wouldn't be a problem if this was present on 1 or 2 characters but this bland and immature vibe exist on almost every character so far. The writing is rushed, the romance is of the immature kind, you know the kind of romance that exist in the fantasies of people who sit at home all day watching nothing but romantic dramas, yea the pathetic kind. I don't mind romance if its well made but yea, the romance in the novel is quite frankly disgusting. now people may think that I write this to be mean, but that's not true, I merely give criticism to help author improve, if I were to just compliment author for everything he writes author will just keep making mistakes.