Review Detail of Yuri_is_Ntr in Waifu Gacha System (On Hold)
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Look, now I read all chapters and could give a full opinion on this novel. Yeah it's dropped in the score from my first attempt. Problems like I pointed out before not getting any better. Pacing and characters that act as not how they would act, is still same. I don't know if that's an actual problem because I do like big harems. But if character don't act as they supposed to act, is it truly what readers wants? I mean, we come here for girls that we already know, but they don't have same personality only looks and some parts. That's all. Character of mc is just unbearable. And if you see what kind of anime author actually used, he's luckluster in brain department become even more obvious. Is it truly Adam? No, he is not the same badass that you know from ragnarok manga. He is just some dude, that apparently think that luck is a most powerful thing in the world. He have nerfed version of his ability , he doesn't train. And he doesn't work for anything in his life. Author just give him girls. And about his abilities and world background. Author add dxd, but I don't think he actually read light novel. He doesn't seem to understand how strong people he add, and how problematic they are for a future. And it's really weird, 3 factions that have people who could easily obliterate whole countries, sided with Japan...how this supposed to work? It's totally unbelievable and useless for them. They have underworld /heaven, they don't need to fear American heroes. And knowing all this , this opportunistic guys have guts to add all his points in luck and never bother with strength and agility. In the world where trihexa could destroy world... That's beyond me. Like I could get that you main priority is romance part of the story. But you not even trying. You create whole arc when Adam get himself captured by humans and need to rely on his women's. But you keep talking that he is not a useless leach that hide behind his girls back... And under all circumstances, you never actually showed how strong he is. Let me remind you , Zeus from ragnarok that get him, and Zeus from dxd is two different gods. And approximately Zeus from dxd would be on par with hades, which was on the 10 strongest creature list under number 8. And someone like great red which was ultimate in power and not even count in 10 strongest list was slained in a future. ... I just doesn't know what to think. Is it good? It's frustrating. All those stuff add up and repeated constantly. So take my word, you will see it even if you try to not think much about it. It's will get in to you skin like a worm and wriggle you soul soon enough. But hey, author say that he gonna show mc true strength soon enough...just like he say, that mc wouldn't be weak fry but we could believe in it right? P. S. Arc in a prison was infuriating.
Waifu Gacha System (On Hold)
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... ...Umu... You just revealed all reasons why I dropped this novel quietly .... ... only that I predicted That there would be a lot of problems and Mistakes even before the prison arc and Dxd began . As soon as I saw that MC women were already more Powerful than him even tho they were level One , That he have a Nerfed "Eyes of the lord" and that He added point to his Luck two times in a row, I was like : " Yooo, This fanfic will probably go down very fast, Along with my expectations! " . And it seems I was right. So i dropped it quietly without saying anything.... I guess you wrote this comment to keep the people who want some common sense in fanfic, well made harem , and not too dumb and useless MC Far away from this story. But I gotta say, You have a Lot of Free time writing this Lol. Well, there are people who like this fanfic so In the end everyone have their preference đ€·đ»ââ
Eh, mostly because I was really pissed of by this fic. If something doesn't even have chances to be good, there is no need to waste time and read everything and discuss problems. In my opinion fanfic does have potential even with author desire just to write romance and not trying to make an actual story.
I_Am_L_72:... ...Umu... You just revealed all reasons why I dropped this novel quietly .... ... only that I predicted That there would be a lot of problems and Mistakes even before the prison arc and Dxd began . As soon as I saw that MC women were already more Powerful than him even tho they were level One , That he have a Nerfed "Eyes of the lord" and that He added point to his Luck two times in a row, I was like : " Yooo, This fanfic will probably go down very fast, Along with my expectations! " . And it seems I was right. So i dropped it quietly without saying anything.... I guess you wrote this comment to keep the people who want some common sense in fanfic, well made harem , and not too dumb and useless MC Far away from this story. But I gotta say, You have a Lot of Free time writing this Lol. Well, there are people who like this fanfic so In the end everyone have their preference đ€·đ»ââ
Every story has a potential... ..Its up to the Author to develop it well... ..but not everyone can do that.... ..Which is why I sometimes read shit stories just to pass time...
Yuri_is_Ntr:Eh, mostly because I was really pissed of by this fic. If something doesn't even have chances to be good, there is no need to waste time and read everything and discuss problems. In my opinion fanfic does have potential even with author desire just to write romance and not trying to make an actual story.
Guys, don't worry. Author handle mc op. Now he can lift more than 1 ton. And kill sirzech in less than minute ,and riser in one hit...riser couldn't even regenerate! P. S. Hahaha Hahaha HAHAHAHAhaha oh wait, are serious? What was that? Either way, spider man could lift like 8 ton without problems and spider men physically weak. What could do super devil just with rough strength is questionable. But do remember, serafall could destroy whole country in one spell in less than a second. That's the level of fight we talking about...I'm done, I am dead. What did I do to deserve this stupidity, God?!
I should have read your review earlier the synopsis is clickbait, the authro said op and it's adam I got hyped cause adam has godlike averall abilities but realiry is cruel, a downgraded eyes of the lord and no godlike physique like in the manga it's only fck and fck and fck again and again. dropped it.
Damn, did the author actually write that? I've legit got secondhand embarrassment, holy shit. Someone who can only lift 1 tonne could beat a Super Devil who also fought in a war filled with Country-level combatants? BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA--That's genuinely fucking hilarious. Author has truly gone off the rails with his delusions of what OP is lmao. For reference, Sirzechs is Class T in lifting strength - Thats, at least, the ability to lift one BILLION tonnes. So the fact the MC took out such a guy when all he can do is lift 1 tonne...its genuinely absurd. Even if the MC used Eyes of the Lord. I'm glad I read your review and comments, man. You've saved me a lot of time, mate.
Yuri_is_Ntr:Guys, don't worry. Author handle mc op. Now he can lift more than 1 ton. And kill sirzech in less than minute ,and riser in one hit...riser couldn't even regenerate! P. S. Hahaha Hahaha HAHAHAHAhaha oh wait, are serious? What was that? Either way, spider man could lift like 8 ton without problems and spider men physically weak. What could do super devil just with rough strength is questionable. But do remember, serafall could destroy whole country in one spell in less than a second. That's the level of fight we talking about...I'm done, I am dead. What did I do to deserve this stupidity, God?!
I don't think he actually read original novel or even watched anime. He doesn't have much knowledge on dxd or ragnarok... But this novel is not about power and fighting, it's about getting girls. He doesn't think much about anything other then girls. Though they personality and romance is screwed.
Lazyy:Damn, did the author actually write that? I've legit got secondhand embarrassment, holy shit. Someone who can only lift 1 tonne could beat a Super Devil who also fought in a war filled with Country-level combatants? BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA--That's genuinely fucking hilarious. Author has truly gone off the rails with his delusions of what OP is lmao. For reference, Sirzechs is Class T in lifting strength - Thats, at least, the ability to lift one BILLION tonnes. So the fact the MC took out such a guy when all he can do is lift 1 tonne...its genuinely absurd. Even if the MC used Eyes of the Lord. I'm glad I read your review and comments, man. You've saved me a lot of time, mate.
Even if its only about romance and getting girls...the author should still make it so he doesn't disrespect the source material the way he has. And from what I read, the author didn't do much of a good job with the romance/girl portion either - it was all rushed as hell and forced.
Yuri_is_Ntr:I don't think he actually read original novel or even watched anime. He doesn't have much knowledge on dxd or ragnarok... But this novel is not about power and fighting, it's about getting girls. He doesn't think much about anything other then girls. Though they personality and romance is screwed.
Well...yea.. Thinking like this kinda make you wonder, why it's was so popular when it's literally failed in every aspects.
Lazyy:Even if its only about romance and getting girls...the author should still make it so he doesn't disrespect the source material the way he has. And from what I read, the author didn't do much of a good job with the romance/girl portion either - it was all rushed as hell and forced.
Lemons. The majority of guys on this site are horny bastards and if a story has mildly decent *** scenes...they think the story is the best thing since the creation of sliced bread. That's just how this site functions, I guess~
Yuri_is_Ntr:Well...yea.. Thinking like this kinda make you wonder, why it's was so popular when it's literally failed in every aspects.
Lazyy:Lemons. The majority of guys on this site are horny bastards and if a story has mildly decent *** scenes...they think the story is the best thing since the creation of sliced bread. That's just how this site functions, I guess~