Review Detail of Ragnar147 in HighSchool DxD: Fan-fic

this is basically a copy paste of the original story whit little bit add on to it it could have been good whit the set up but mc just actes sa original one instead of being proactive and its beter to read the original story then this one mc hes good potential that is not used at all author should start over and mack the mc better by making them more assertive if he knows the plot he should prepare and be stronger then originale and use sharingan to try to use magic by observing himself use the intellect of lelouch and light and not being so weak willed or so ok whit being a slave when he knows that risa hes tricky the original by letting him die so she can have another member of her prestige to help her break marriage contract with riser the story is a disappointment i dropped it after 20ch because i just felt the story fell short of my expectations of the good set up and so close in likeness to the original story P.S sorry for any spelling errors