Story development is pretty average since this story is basically the same as the original, but Issei being more intelligent and more powerful with the wishes he gets, and less lustful than the original. His ‘goal’ or ‘dream’ or whatever you want to call it is a bit unrealistic, wanting to protect Rias’ smile but the author at least has a goal, unlike many others’ mindless and goalless adventure and action fanfics. Writing Quality is good, with minimal grammar mistakes and smooth sentence structure, making it readable and easy to understand what the author is trying to convey. Updating stability is okay, not too slow (for now) but not very fast either. What can I say about character design? This is a fanfic and the characters have similar personalities as their original. From what I noticed, Asia just seems to be a bit less airheaded than usual, and she jnows how the world actually works, but still a ditz and slight airhead, Rias is less spoiled, but still asks her servants to fight for her. Story development...this is a highschool DxD fanfic so what can we expect, it’s the exact same way the original develop, so unless author introduces an original plot that is trash, this section will remain 5 stars.
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