Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in Unaccountable Role

I am a sucker for isekai story lines, so I wil lgive this novel 5 thumbs up! The plot has a promising story, together with the setting and art style paired on the cover. I really love how the author expresses his/her thoughts and adds multiple words to bring light to the story. The onyl advise that I can is that there are some lines that needs commas, periods, semicolons, and dashes that might help to describe the story. Also, it will be great if you can post the author's thoughts on the author's notes when writing the chapters. I have only a single chapter for this book, and Im quite impressed by the flow of the story. Good job author, and good luck on your story!