Review Detail of 12_Gage in Billionaire Player

The artwork is great and the story is quite enjoyable, but the grammer can be pretty terrible at times. If there was just one alpha reader or proofreader of some kind that was fluent or a native english speaker, then this series would be great. I just keep getting bothered by the elementary school mistakes I am seeing. I don’t know if it is translated from another language, but if it is then he has done alright so far I guess. Just recommend having someone proofread it a bit before releasing each chapter.