Review Detail of Monarch_Of_Death in X FORCE
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I like how the story started... Two ways of how to heal a wound, cool... By the way, the story is good at detailing, I was sure found it great... It was mesmerizing that made me read more than expected... The only prob I found is the first to fifth chaps are too short (Tho I think that's not a problem anymore because there already many chaps)...
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Omara_Ai
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hey... I see you have so many books, i was just wondering which one should I read a bit so that I can rate it? Its just that am short on tym with life, work and writing.. I'll be waiting for your response
Monarch_Of_Death:Please review mine too... I saw your post at the forum
hey... I have gone through your synopsis, okay am not an experienced author myself bt I can tell you this... first elaborate in it so as you can capture the attention of your audience, then,.. i know many of us that English isn't our first language bt look at your tenses in your sentences... it's not too intense but if you correct them, your work would be hard to be dropped by anyone... I had time for the synopsis, I promise that I'll continue reading and give you feedback. if I sounded out of place, it's my mistake and I apologize. I'll get in touch with you soon
Monarch_Of_Death:Please review mine too... I saw your post at the forum
Omara_Ai:hey... I have gone through your synopsis, okay am not an experienced author myself bt I can tell you this... first elaborate in it so as you can capture the attention of your audience, then,.. i know many of us that English isn't our first language bt look at your tenses in your sentences... it's not too intense but if you correct them, your work would be hard to be dropped by anyone... I had time for the synopsis, I promise that I'll continue reading and give you feedback. if I sounded out of place, it's my mistake and I apologize. I'll get in touch with you soon
hey already reviewed yours... I have read it, though not all of it as (sorry) but your english strained my brain cells and am having a bad headache. it's like I can't concentrate enough... So you have potential just little spelling mistakes. Also, elaborate on some aspects so that you don't leave us asking ourselves questions that we have no answers to. Then, repetition... don't say something in this paragraph only to repeat it in another way in the next paragraph. I would recommend you to use Grammarly, but be careful as it rewrites anything it sees is incorrect though you know it it's not. And the word 'tho' I suggest you use the full words as you are writing to millions of potential readers out there. Maybe you can use a US or UK keyboard with the auto-correction features. And by the way, where are you from.. id lyk to be friends with you
Monarch_Of_Death:Okay... Don't worry I'm not sensitive
Thanks... My friend also said this to me, but I can't do much because I was writing in a rush so that all happened... I'm planning to re-edit it when I have a free time. By the way, sorry for the headache... I'm from Ph... Thanks again
Omara_Ai:hey already reviewed yours... I have read it, though not all of it as (sorry) but your english strained my brain cells and am having a bad headache. it's like I can't concentrate enough... So you have potential just little spelling mistakes. Also, elaborate on some aspects so that you don't leave us asking ourselves questions that we have no answers to. Then, repetition... don't say something in this paragraph only to repeat it in another way in the next paragraph. I would recommend you to use Grammarly, but be careful as it rewrites anything it sees is incorrect though you know it it's not. And the word 'tho' I suggest you use the full words as you are writing to millions of potential readers out there. Maybe you can use a US or UK keyboard with the auto-correction features. And by the way, where are you from.. id lyk to be friends with you