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CoolForniteplayer
CoolForniteplayerAuthor4yr
2020-11-25 04:48

@instagram Nathanisontheway4 I gave Focus a 5/5 in everything but writing quality. It isn't that I make any major errors, but it seems like I can never re-read through a chapter I've uploaded without wanting to pull my hair out because I made a typo here, or spelt something wrong there. But! if you can forgive an author for constantly spelling dao, doa, I'm sure Focus will be something you enjoy for a long time to come! Aside from my mistakes, Focus has a lot of strengths. I believe the world and lore are all very interesting. There are countless clans and sects, and each has a unique history with each other that pushes the story forward. In terms of character development, Chen rui straight forward as you can get, but it's clear he himself . I also try to give every important character a unique backstory of note that explains their motivations and personality. For stability of uploads, that's something you never have to worry about :) I've been uploading at least 2 chapters a day for the better part of a month now, and the only times I uploaded a single chapter was back when I didn't split my 4000 word chapters in multiple parts. You'll have something to come back to enjoy everyday :) As for the story itself, the second volume will speak for itself. The first was an introductory arc, where we introduce the mc, who he is, his back story, and his first female companion. The second, however, truly delves into the lore of the Focus verse. We have mystery, backstabbing, and plenty of face slapping. I hope you'll all enjoy Focus as much as I enjoy writing it everyday! :)

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CoolForniteplayer
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Hanna_Chow
Hanna_ChowLv2

I will contact you!

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CoolForniteplayer
CoolForniteplayerAuthor

Ok

Hanna_Chow:I will contact you!
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Christelle_Etah
Christelle_EtahLv11

I love you author for your honesty. i’m about to go through your book. will start voting your book from now on😊

4yr
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CoolForniteplayer
CoolForniteplayerAuthor

YOu too

Christelle_Etah:I love you author for your honesty. i’m about to go through your book. will start voting your book from now on😊
4yr
CoolForniteplayer
CoolForniteplayerAuthor

Thank you for that i will vote on your novel too

Christelle_Etah:I love you author for your honesty. i’m about to go through your book. will start voting your book from now on😊
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CoolForniteplayer
CoolForniteplayerAuthor

This novel has to be redo im sorry it has been given very bad review such as a lot of grammatical reviews so i have to redo it sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

4yr

jenos_showerheads
jenos_showerheadsLv5

i read the first couple of chapters and i'm honestly really hooked on the world building. the way you listed all the specs like stamina, health, etc. was v cool because you don't see that often in novels and that tibit made it feel like an actual game

4yr
Scollins_Singh
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Keep up challenging your talent everyone and happy halloween stay safe wear a mask everyway you go it winter and the statics of covid 19 are going up all over the globe so stay safe and wish god all the best and make this treat go away and support this author thank you.

4yr
CoolForniteplayer
CoolForniteplayerAuthor

FINALLY 100 CHAPTERS GOOD LUCK READING THAT WAS THE LAST BUT NEXT VOLUME I WILL CONTINUE WRITING MORE CHAPTERS GOOD LUCK READING GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

4yr
CoolForniteplayer
CoolForniteplayerAuthor

Hey, Author here. I’m really happy to see such good comments about my book, and I hope it continues into the future as well. But that’s not what I wrote this review for... If someone rates the book at 3-4 stars, I sincerely believe that there was an issue with the book. After all, I can’t notice everything wrong, so I will check to see if there can be any improvements. Additionally, I hope that people who give 3-4 stars will specify what problems they see. Also, I would love to have those people to come back and read the altered novel again before finally deciding how they feel. Last of all though, to all readers and writers alike, thank you for taking the time to read it. Have fun !

4yr
Faysal_Ahmed_5058
Faysal_Ahmed_5058Lv2

I am a new reader of this npvelso I saw the synopsis and read some reviews here. Then i gave it a try. Its really good with the world building and character formation. A lot of words in a chapter too. I enjoyed it very much. But I want more action and drama here

4yr
Anotoki
AnotokiLv12

It was enjoyable even though there are some grammatical issues here and there but it was no biggie. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

4yr
Hanna_Chow
Hanna_ChowLv2

wOW MORE CHapters are out yes i was waiting for this whole week and finally 80 chapters on the dot i can't believe my eyes insane This author only created this book couple weeks ago and look at it now views chapters wow incredibly insane that i can't believe excellent job author i have to say that you are incredible that you made these chapters so fast you are like a super fast typing machine good luck continuing at your success.

4yr
Hanna_Chow
Hanna_ChowLv2

Great book, great writing and superb character development. The journey we experience along with the MC from the baby arc in the beginning through the academy arc. The book stays consistent with writing and develops the world beautifully. We experience the MC gradually develop into what is considered a healthy and fulfilled person while also searching for meaning to his existence. 5 stars all day long

4yr
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